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Day 10 - 202 words - Not a rock, I'm just Ruth
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Day 10 - 202 words
Title: Coda 6:07
Author: Just Ruth
Disclaimer: Supernatural is the property of Eric Kripke and the CW. Characters/Situations are being borrowed for entertainment purposes only. You think anyone would pay me for this?
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Gen
Characters: Castiel, Dean, Sam.
Summary: This is how I think it should have gone down.
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“Physically he’s perfectly fine,” Castiel looked away.

“Yeah?” Dean frowned, catching what was in his voice. “But what?”

“It’s his soul,” the angel looked troubled. “It’s gone.”

“Gone?” Dean looked at the . . . thing sitting in the chair. “Gone. Then that’s it.” He drew his gun.

“Dean!” it gasped. “Dean!”

“You’re not Sam. You’re some god-damned soulless thing that doesn’t belong here.”

“Dean,” Castiel interrupted. “Don’t do this.”

“No. I’m done. No more lies. No more games.”

“Dean!” Castiel grasped his arm. “Do. Not. Do. This.”

Dean locked eyes with Castiel for a long moment. “Fine.” He shoved his gun back into his belt. “I’m done. Done!” He left the hotel room. The engine of the Impala roared into the night.

“Cas. Thank you . . .”

“I did not save you.” Said the angel flatly, “I saved him.”

He was gone in a flutter of wings.

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sharona1x2 From: sharona1x2 Date: November 11th, 2010 09:51 am (UTC) (Link)
I like your version!
just_ruth From: just_ruth Date: November 12th, 2010 08:29 pm (UTC) (Link)
Thanks, but do I dare show it to anyone?
erinrua From: erinrua Date: November 12th, 2010 06:26 am (UTC) (Link)
Wow, this is powerful stuff! And you've got the voices and mannerisms spot on. Whoof. It makes me ache for Sam all the more, because he didn't ask for any of this: he jumped into Hell, but the rest? Isn't his fault. Oh, boys ...

Good to see your muses whispering again! :)
just_ruth From: just_ruth Date: November 12th, 2010 08:28 pm (UTC) (Link)
Yeah, but do I dare show this to anyone?

This is a jumping off point for something and I've already got a another MiniNaNo started.
erinrua From: erinrua Date: November 13th, 2010 02:26 am (UTC) (Link)
You can always let it percolate and come back to it when you have free time. :)
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